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Your Hands by ~FuruFuru:iconFuruFuru:

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Slide your fingers through your hair
And clouds stop drifting to wait there
For their turn, brushed into form
By your gentle hands…
The clouds promise never to storm.

The moon slips into a mirror on the wall
For you to hold, in chilly nights of fall
Hanging in the blue heavens alone
Upon its cheeks
The yearn for your loving caress shone.

The crickets call out all night long
Working hard, to chirp endless songs
Hoping your hands will harmonize with such gentleness
Each time they pray
For humans to find love in loveless-ness.

If ever a time comes, should ever you cry
Please don't wipe those tears from your eyes
Lest you sadden those angelic fingers
I’ll kiss away any pain
In woven embrace, my hand lingers.

Star lights twinkle in the northern sky
Downward to earth with magic it flies
Worn on your ring as promise of love
Becoming a diamond
This gift from above

And now, my love…this Valentine’s Day
In sense of all this that I want to say
Words deftly written for you to see
As fingers trace palm
Ne…hold on to me.
©2009 ~FuruFuru
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Author's Comments

hmm....I really, really should have payed attention more to poetry than prose during high school.

x_x *pats the writing*

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*Secchanfan23 Feb 9, 2009, 10:10:23 PM
Ahhh high school poetry... *reminisces*

I used to be so bad at an eloquent style of poetry like this, mine always ended up having a hardcore take on life.

But I personally prefer poems like this. And a lot of times, it's a lot deeper than prose can ever be. The imagery, the double meanings...makes me think a lot more. :) Ah, I should stop rambling~

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~Biruchi Feb 10, 2009, 6:06:35 AM
Nice Valentine's

the poem was beautiful

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~Veester Feb 10, 2009, 1:34:49 PM
don't look down on your poetry... this is beautiful :D Simple in its structure, yet deep in its meaning. So don't worry about it, since I keep finding that poetry is just verbal regurgitation... and only sometimes with form.

Whoever this is for is lucky...

Will you be my Valentine?

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~Bishimimou Feb 11, 2009, 4:24:35 PM
Very beautiful, as always, Furu-chan.

It made me smile. I can't write poetry to save my life (I hope beyond hope that I'll never be put into that situation)

It would be a great piece of work to bring into english to use as poetry analysis for a project sometime or another.

Actually if I were able to, I'd jump at the chance to use any of your works for a project in my English class. (she's really strict though, and generally she wants us to read what she gives to us >-<;)

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~FuruFuru Feb 14, 2009, 11:55:07 PM
>: *reminisces too*

@_@ I think I've never been good with poetry...hmm...@_@ My poetry tends to become a bit...too cheezy-ish and lovey, even though I was aiming for the imagery and double meaning thingy that you were talking about<333 @_@

^-^ A hardcore take on life is good too though<333 Sometimes, it's those realistic traits and observations about daily life that makes poetry become wonderful<333.

ah <_< >_> --->is rambling too. (butbutbut!!<33 ^_^<33 I enjoyed reading your comment<33 It wasn't rambly at all<333 and was very nice<3)

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~FuruFuru Feb 14, 2009, 11:55:58 PM
Thank you<33333

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~FuruFuru Feb 15, 2009, 12:03:57 AM
^-^ You are very kind<333 Thanks you for the reassurance and the nice comments, ne?<333

ah <_< >_> Actually, I think I'm very lucky instead<3. *doesn't deserve to be loved* >: because my life is too dramatic sometimes...x_x.

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~FuruFuru Feb 15, 2009, 12:08:50 AM
^__^<3333 Your comment made me smile<333. Thank you, ne?<3 >: For being so nice, even though your writings are much more creative and interesting than mine<3 (@_@--->is trying to be less cliche in my writings...x_x though sometimes I do it without noticing)

>: What Furu writes isn't that good to be used for English class. (>: *sends you lots of patpats for having a strict teacher* ^__^<333 I hope your English class goes well though?<3)

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~Veester Feb 15, 2009, 12:19:54 PM
lol, I had drama a couple months back... wasn't fun. So I kinda feel your pain, though I have a feeling ur definition of drama is very different from mine...

and everyone deserves to be loved. especially you, since you've touched my life in more than one way (and I haven't even met you yet), and I'm sure you've touched others.

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